Blog Stage 8

        Hannah, in your blog "Political Parties" you discuss the good and bad of political parties, but you don't go far into depth with your topic. For example a large majority of Americans do not know the difference in Republicans and Democrats, and many more of the Americans that know of the difference, do not know what Liberals and Comservatives are. Another point is a decent percentage of American citizens choose their politics party off of what party their parents follow. This can lead to people voting for beliefs that they don't even follow, which will ultimately lead to biased elections.
        In the end you need to add more supporting evidence and add sources to prove your facts and points. You need to have statistics in your paper to to back up your ideas, also don't have a question in your paper ("so are political parties good or bad") and don't answer it at the end. You do clarify that we are all Americans and they are dangerous but you never fully say what they are.